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Yassmin=Jasmine

a Jasmine they named me
so tiny and fair
just like the flower
gentle and soft
so they say
so that's my name
in Arabic they say
a Jasmine is Yassmin
proud of it I'm
in love with flowers
as am part of their family

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  • esroddo silver member
    July 15, 2007

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    Beautiful write

    Yes sweet rose you are as sweet as your name. And gentle with a soft and loving heart. (LISA)
    "in Arabic they say
    a Jasmine is Yassmin
    proud of it I'm
    in love with flowers
    as am part of their family"


  • dustookie2
    July 10, 2007
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    Yeah I am with RedSnow i do like the smell of Jasmine very pleasing to my sensors


  • RedSnow
    July 10, 2007
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    Good Luck!!!

    I love the smell of Jasmine! You have a lovely name.
    I wish I could speak Arabic.


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    July 6, 2007
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    Lovely poem Yassmina
    Very nicely written. I am sure the flowers are proud to have you in their family.
    I just signed in to post my poem for this contest. Give me ten minutes then come and check my poem out!

    I would add "I" before the 'am' in the last line.

    Keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
    Nooni