A fabled story I once wrote,
about a girl name Fierra.
Sad story indeed,
that was an edited version of mine.
September 18 was the day she was born.
With greenish blue eyes and rosy cheek,
she was left alone,in the alien world.
Her eyes always rains,
as tragedy stalked her every move.
Sun hated her beauty,
So,lived in the dark she was,
for a long long time.
Bipolar and depression
alienated her from the society.
No one but sorrow and loneliness,
accompanied her through this harsh,cold world.
Though the world has been harsh to her,
she was kind to the world.
Helping the needy along the way,
pick up a few good deeds here and there.
God loved her so much.
He took her pure,undamaged soul,
for he could not bare any longer
to see her in pain.
So,that was the story,
of a pretty,divine girl,
name Fierra.
Author notes
um...this is why i choose the name fierra...it was based on the character i wrote...i instantly fell in love with that name...and how i wish to like her...patient,kind and caring she was,though everyone arounds her hated her,except those who she help...and she doesn't kept grudges to anyone,though society treated her badly...
A contest entry
- WHAT'S IN YOUR AP NAME OR IMAGE???? by dustookie2.
3500 points, ended July 22, 2007, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"Her eyes always rains,
as tragedy stalked her every move."
I love those lines. They really just speaks of a life that must be so hard.
This piece is full of sadness, yet it shows a really strong girl, and I understand that you like her name. I really relate to some of it. Very well written! -
Good Luck!!!
Oh I love this story too! I have a picture that would go good with this poem I think. I have been thinking about writing a poem to go with it but this poem suits it. Message me if you would like to see the picture and I'll try to send it to you. Great story and Beautiful name.
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Thank you for the pleasure of this read just imagine a world based on your author notes...be some place to live.
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Sweet i love fierra 2 its a really cool name--goodluck in the contest
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This is awesome, I love it
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