Internal window opens,
true self emerges,
that was once engulf by darkness.
Cleanse soul and mind as companies,
to this journey of reality.
Author notes
I just wrote what was on my mind...internal window here means the heart.It's kinda like a preparation to face reality,without any mask,hiding true-self,without the corrupted minds and damaged soul...hope you like it...
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Commentary
Revealing what life has to say is truly a remarkable thing. But I liked how you just spoke what was on your mind the day you wrote this -
Amazing
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thank you for entering the contest.......
I really like where you have taken the prompt....
well written
best of luck
Tracey
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