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Internal Window


Open my window.
Please tell me what you see.
I struggle to believe
Open my window....
I want to breathe!!

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
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Comments


  • HeavenScent4U
    July 6, 2007

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    tell me....what DO you see? i feel a bit choked up here as this feels desperate best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 6, 2007

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    thank you for entering the contest.......
    These are 5 lines with soooo much meaning conveyed...
    well done
    best of luck
    Tracey