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Internal window


Internal window's
opaque
translucence.

A smudged looking glass
of introspective images~

creating the
perfect optical illusion.

A contest entry

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  • tara wilson gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    lol....yes, I think sometimes our internal window does seem a little distorted when we want it to be - great poem - thank you for this entry!


  • HeavenScent4U
    July 6, 2007

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    wow, i think you nailed the prompt on this one very full of imagery. you really use your words well best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Wow an excellent piece! I think this looks like a winner
    All the best to you
    Gaylene


  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 6, 2007

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    thank you for entering the contest.......
    I really like where you have taken the prompt....
    best of luck
    Tracey