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                              "NAME"


          Whats in a "name" I say,
          When it makes ugly, a pretty flower!
          A lazy, a crazy fellow!
          One wonder how a man with a big tummy,
          calls himself 'Slim Teddy'

          Name do wonders, don't you say?
          with Liars becoming Saints with a 'Name'
          GOODY,a rapist wears a mask
          with the help of his name.

          THEN WHAT IS THIS "NAME"?
          A refuge for people who hide behind names,
          A way out for some who wants to be
          What they are not.
          Lets be true to our names, some say
          And we end  up becoming the name
          Then who we are in real!
         
   

         

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  • RedSnow
    July 10, 2007
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    Good Luck!!!

    So very true. A good write that makes me think. All in all a good thing.


  • patsoldcat
    July 9, 2007
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    names

    some call you one thing and yet othes something else,
    is it important what they call us or what we call ourselves. better to find our true self and show the world then hide behind false titles and masks of names that are not us.
    you did a great job here my dear so very very nice.


  • dustookie2
    July 6, 2007
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    Got some great points to ponder over brought a smile to my face thank you