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A call from the Doc.......

Hello ... Kiarna; this is Doc Monkey

I hope you don’t mind me calling you

I’ve been reading poems from your friends at AP

It seems you’re a little scared of what I going to do 

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Well let me tell you this, it’s nothing to worry about sweetness

When you come in for the day, we will meet and say hello

Then my friend Doc Teddy will help you go to the land of sleepiness

While I work on removing your skin tag you can dream of an animal show 

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Doc Teddy and mummy will be there when you awake

Although you might still feel tired and a little sore

Then soon it will be time for home to munch on banana cake

With not much more pain that if you bang you knee on the floor 

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Now little one I can’t stay on the phone and chat all day

There are more brave boys and girls I need to call

I hope our chat has took your little worries’ away

Just remember it won’t hurt no more than if you had a little fall 

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Well goodbye for now sweetness you brave little girl

Doc Teddy and I will see you very soon

Dancing into hospital on July 31st happily doing a twirl

Singing my growth will soon be gone like a flown away balloon

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Bye for now kiarna .......

Doc Monkey .....

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Author notes

hi sweetie i hope this makes you feel a lil better and takes away some worrys xxx i love you xxx

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  • PoetryPuppy
    July 7, 2007
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    thank you for your cute poem Kiarna


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Ooooooh this is adorable. I am certain Kiarna will love it. Your picture is just fabulous
    3T


  • DJ Harley silver member
    July 6, 2007

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    what a wonder poem for kiarna. i know she will love this cute poem to cheer her up
    nice poem
    good luck in the contest

    your master 4 ever


  • tawk gold member
    July 6, 2007
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    I know that Kiarna will love this!! What wonderful write of love and hope. Great job


    • The Poetic Angel
      July 6, 2007
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      fanx u Aunt Theresa i just wanted her to feel a bit not so scared xxx cheeky xxx


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Aww I don't think Kiarna could be in better hands than Doc Monkey He sounds very caring and wonderful She will be dancing around in no time
    Mum x x x
    Gaylene

    • The Poetic Angel
      July 6, 2007
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      fanx u mum yip she will be okies she my little sweetie and Doc Monkey knows that.. thats why he asked Doc Teddy to help i love you mum xxxxx cheeky xxx


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Awwww !

    Dr Monkey will surely make Kiarna feel more at ease Nicely done me LLT. Good luck xxx

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