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16 Lines that Never Happened.

four lines in each stanza
four stanzas in each piece
emotion poured forth
will the madness cease?

I wrote it all down
rhymes, rhythms, and song
an attempt to rid the pain
to stop feeling wrong

i'm learning about myself
in ways i've never before
i'm knocking down defences
for the one i adore

Then i stopped the action
a speedbumb in my track
i watched the cursor blink
and erased it all back.





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  • Broken Faith
    July 6, 2007

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    Okay.

    Well, I never approve of deleting a poem... -.- But I like the rhythm here. Great write. Keep it up. <3 Later babe.