cocoon
safe, protected
hiding, growing, living
the constraints are getting tighter
EMERGE
the time has come for wings to spread
stretching, reaching, loving
unprotected
alive
Author notes
butterfly cinquain
In a list
A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critiques returned.
Comments
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Although I am new to all this, I can see this is a worthy winner, well done.
Ronn
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Excellent use of the butterfly cinquain, it illustrates all the phases of maturing and speaks of more than the butterfly itself. Thank you for this thoughtful entry.
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