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The Aspirin

Relationships rip themselves

as emotions bulge,

 

both, love and

hatred. 

 

Rags of feelings

cling to my face

 

and I shed them,

one by one

 

until all that remains

is a naked

poem. 

 

I drink the wine of my tears

all night.

 

In the morning, I wake up

with a terrible hangover.

 

I gulp an aspirin.

 

In that aspirin, I swallow

our love, our sex, our smiles, our fights, our love letters, our midnight phone calls, our holding hands in movie theaters, our dreams, our failures.

 

I gulp it down

with a glass of water. 

 

 

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To Vinay.
~The Risen Sun. 6th July, 2007.

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  • Laughing Buddh
    July 9, 2007
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    hehe......knew ur entry wud be different!gud write,btw.


  • Leela
    July 6, 2007
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    unique

    your choice of words are very interesting and i'm humbled to say, a 16 year old taught me a few things today, for I had to look up a couple of the words xD if it's said you watch too much t.v., it is apparrent that you read a great deal as well. cheers to learning. This was a wonderful read. thanks.

    *Leah