you'll be in my dreams tonight
[do you realize how far in we are??]
you're the only one underneath my skies.
I'm always gonna be the one standing here
Saying stupid shit;; i love you
{?Forever?}
And i'm sure even she sees it...
How perfectly centered my life is on you.
Pathetic, i'm sure... +doesnt BeGiN to cover it+
but come on, when we walk off this stage,
who else will be dumb enough to cater
to {{everything}} you ask?
my sentence is twenty to life...
*darling, these lights don't do you justice*
i'll die in your //shadow//
Author notes
*sings wannabe Ramones* i wanna be your girlfriend!
haha. or...i can be the family pet :] doesn't matter.
A contest entry
- Of Pretty Things and Diamond Rings... by TheStupidLamb.
1750 points, ended July 9, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling All Dirty Pretty Dollies- I Need An Ap Family by Heartbeatsxfading.
300 points, ended August 2, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
eh. i dont care.
Comments
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i like this poem....
lol hows about both?
favorite part was
"Pathetic, i'm sure... +doesnt BeGiN to cover it+
but come on, when we walk off this stage,
who else will be dumb enough to cater
to {{everything}} you ask?
my sentence is twenty to life...
*darling, these lights don't do you justice*
i'll die in your //shadow// "
Loved em...
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my sentence is twenty to life...
I love that line. Great job and thanks for entering the conest! Good luck!
Black Ink
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