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[anti]hero{ine}

She's the one//she's the one
and Oh,, i'm drowning in fucking flames.
my skin is singeing me...
but you can't know.
Your smile was so fleeting
i fell fastest and crashed hardest
it's all kept in your top drawer,
in your sheets {{and from her?}}
I'm gonna keep your memory close
until i get close enough to make it hurt
but the alarms arent gonna sound
cuz i know i'm still under your skin
my m-e-l-t-e-d *plastic* ♥heart♥
is still seeping from your pores;;
i hope she feels THAT.
feels ME.
feels US.
[[beacuse i always will]]

Author notes

i just listened to the whole Boys Like Girls cd for inspiration.

A contest entry

psh, its practically an acid trip, so whatever.

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  • Innocent Evil
    January 1, 2008
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    good job!


  • Matt Holck
    September 7, 2007

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    my m-e-l-t-e-d *plastic* ♥heart♥

    this mutation is spot on for spattered emphasis


  • forbidden-colour
    August 1, 2007
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    This is cool [:
    Thanks for entering
    x


  • LucyLightning
    July 11, 2007

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    amazering. I love love love ittttt. =]
    & I love Boys Like Girls. Theyse amazing!

    =]]

    Good luck in the contest!

  • XweXareXbrokenX
    July 5, 2007

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    oh wonderful...i love it...i love that you used the whoel cd for inspiration...great band they are...lol...great piece...thanks for entering good luck in the contest

    XchaoticXdisasterX

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