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Birch Tribes ~

Missing image

Birch tribes standing, forest grown,

quilts of indian bark carefully sewn ~

 

Canopy of artists pallete,

etched on canvas, oils scalloped ~

 

Wintry blue hues, blown frigid trees,

drink from thy waters, frozen grass freeze ~

 

Sunsets blowing orange silhouettes,

warming seasons as dripping sap sweats ~

 

Tigers eye, crimson dreams,

brought to life, by melting streams ~

Author notes

Hues of light shine to lead us ~

Darkness can never fade that path ~

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  • Desire gold member
    July 9, 2007

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    Wonderful!!

    Powerful piece Brother Bear
    Love the images You have brought forth and the
    rhyme in this verse especially the sunsets blowing
    orange silhouettes~ Oy and the Tiger's eye
    and crimson dreams...

    Woooooooo hooooooooo
    Congratulations on Your HM Form King~
    even though this one is not in form
    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Sissy Desire~*~


  • Ryno
    July 9, 2007

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    Such an amazing piece of writing... I really love the imagery and the movement and feeling reflecting on the picture in this piece. Awesome work and thanks for the entry.


    Ryan


  • tomisb
    July 6, 2007

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    I had almost forgotten the sweet flavors of your words. It is so nice to hear the dance of natures song interwoven with the light in your heart. Delightful, reveling in the song of your words.


  • tawk gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    This is truly beautiful!! It goes so well with the picture Such wonderful imagery throughout! I loved it s