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Griselda

i look back and can only laugh
so few memories make me feel like this
you brought joy in my life
funny how time can pass
now its jus something i miss
so young and beautiful

if a tear fell from your eyes
couldn't help but feel your pain
kinda girl that spoke her mind
kinda girl with a funny name
so young and beautiful

i'll never forget the times we had
even if they were but a moment in time
now they are all i'll ever have
so hard to say goodbye
so young and beautiful


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tis for a friend that was murdered yesterday morning in killeen at family doller,not much Grizz but its all i got

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  • CourtneyJean
    August 8, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem...very, very beautiful and heartfelt. I'm very sorry to hear about your friend. I have a hard time understanding this world and what goes on in it sometimes...


  • a.changed-soul.
    July 24, 2007
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    Very true!

  • ForgiveForgetAlways
    July 5, 2007

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    You are so right on! I will 4-ever miss u Griz!! I hold your smile clear in my mind and can hear your laugh in my wonderful memories shared with u.