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Near Waterfalls

The sky's blue denim jeans correspond to the tint of my dress
as the waterfalls mimics that of your voice, love and touch  
how he dreams not noticing that nature is watching,
focusing on its dreams, cascading even when the light sleeps

Sitting underneath reminiscent on love's soothing sensations
when her power forced my stubborn emotions to smile
and heaven visited; it seemed like few days within
the heart that you vowed to keep and to always embrace
Shall I rest my palm upon the skin of the water, yours?
Tracing the very essence of your memorable strong chest
combing it thoroughly you kissed my hair, it felt beautiful
I remember the way you spoke to my heart "Your forever mine"

as the waterfalls mimics that of your voice, love and touch
how he dreams not noticing that nature is watching,
focusing on its dreams, cascading even when the light sleeps
like my tears they cascade down the rocks of my cheeks
hoping that it may reach the very toes of your heart
so that you may unbreak the heart that only wanted
nothing more but to love you...

 

 

 

 

 





 

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  • aslanlight
    July 30

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    Admirable poetry! 'how he dreams not noticing that nature is watching,' stunning line that gives me pause for thought. It reminds me of innocence. A lover like a waterfall, excellent!

    Peace Georgia


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    July 20, 2007

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    Very rich write. Beautiful poem, congratulations on the gold.


    whisper


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    July 20, 2007

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    Oh wow, this is EXACTLY the type of thing I was looking for in this contest, breathtaking and so rich in emotion and imagery, you left me speechless

    Thankyou for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you all the best of luck

    Karen