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Unveiled~

Missing image


Stepping softly
upon shells,
unveiling my heart

to the sea.



♥

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"Detrimental Inquiry"

A contest entry

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  • Frozentearz
    July 5, 2007

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    wonderfu work congratulations on your award
    so much said in such few words, love it when it can grab hold of you.
    Blessings
    Frozentearz


  • Desire gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    Wonderful!

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win busy bee!
    Beautiful piece You have penned
    What a take on the prompt~

    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 5, 2007
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    Ohh, this is just a lovely piece of poetry. I can see it, feel the sand. Great piece.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 5, 2007
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    Your Prompt is: Anubis - OR - Detrimental Inquiry