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Prayer of the Newly Dead

Aid me,
  guide me;
    may your nose
      judge me pure.
   

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Quickie 10 word contest - prompt "Anubis"

Anubis guides spirits to the underworld, and uses his keen sense of smell to determine if the soul is pure enough to enter his domain.

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  • Lady Dragonwyck
    July 21, 2007
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    A prayer I will try to remember for future use. I like this very much.

    Lady Dragonwyck


  • MargaretG
    July 6, 2007

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    Quite a heartfelt wish! thanks for the note, it makes all clear. congratulations on your new trophy!


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 5, 2007
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    Now that is an intersting take on the prompt. I lose the "nose" of this, origial and well done :D


    • Epistomolus silver member
      July 6, 2007
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      Thank you for the inspiration. I spent some time learning to read hieroglyphics a couple of years back, just for the fun of it. Unfortunately, most of the reading material available has to do with boasting to the gods about the amount of beer and bread you've got in your posthumous pantry.

  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 5, 2007
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    Your Prompt is: Anubis - OR - Detrimental Inquiry

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