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The night call

A call to the city Jc's feeding his flock,

A noise is disturbing those on the block.

It's just before dawn and still hard to see.

Shane response faster then me,

Then the birdsman is crazy wants to see Jc in hell.

So he blows his head off and ends up going to jail.

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Written August 21st, 2003

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