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My Fat Cat

My fat cat needs to go on a diet
but i don't think he would try it

We feed him what he needs and if
he wants more he steals the dogs
food now isn't that rude

He is stretched out on my waterbed
he must think he is a pampered puss

The prince of the house thats what
he thinks he is and he ignores us
when he don't get his way

but he is ours and we love him any way.

(his name is nikia and if i can find a
pic of him i will share it with you)

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  • jameswadlow
    September 19, 2007

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    having dealt with the feline persuasion before, turn your back on him when he gets uppity.. but the poem is cute, an sweet. thanks


  • crisstiena
    July 23, 2007

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    Oh gosh..

    Being 'owned' by five cats (three of them black) I can really relate to this. But for his health and your sanity, DO put him on a diet!

    Thank you for commenting on my work and giving me the chance to read this! I shall be smiling all day...

    ♦ ~ crisstiena

  • PoetryPuppy
    July 7, 2007
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    thank you for your poem Kiarna