Through expanding space
beyond old inhibitions
the mind may e[r]ase
artificial skins.
As spirit dissolves levels,
inner freedom wins,
consciousness, can chase
surface metamorphosis -
sh[r]edded to replace
superficial grins,
self-deception – whose dark hells
are the greatest sins.
When understanding
maturity underpins,
then momentum spins
through both thick and thin,
talent touches base with place
as feelings akin
to acceptance win
acceptance without need to [t]race
extension within
inner harmony, begins
accepting both what potential spells
and inner shortcomings.
there mind may find rest
empathy, serenity,
all is for the best
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Love...how wonderful these were.
Thanks for entering, good luck.
Bell,
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this is a really good peom i dont ussaly comment on peoples poems but theres something about yours that makes me wanna read on i love it hope you conitue to write more poems like these your a fab poet x
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Hey! i like this one to
i like your haikus
almost as much as i like
sliced bread and butter
lol lame, i know.
good job!
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these are very good haikus and i like your use of words in this paticular stanza its got the most meaning to me good job
When understanding
maturity underpins,
then momentum spins -
wow. i like the play on words here. you did a really good job.
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