Silently
Sitting
Shelved
Waxy hair
Ruby Lips
Porcelain
Crying
Forlorn
Alone
Sitting
Silently
Shelved
My birthday present
A replica doll
Author notes
option one: ruby lips and porcelain skin
A contest entry
- Quickie: With A Few Twists by FallingTwilight.
450 points, ended July 5, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oooo this was really good. very short winded but wonderful for it's context.
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yay shiny! well done for shiny, it definitely deserved it
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Very well doen naddi, dfeffinatly worth the trophy. Beautiful write as always.
lots of love
Chris
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nice one and congrats on the shiney xxx cheeky xxx
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Thank you for putting the option in!
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I apologise for not putting it in when I first submitted it. Good luck judging. XxX
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Wow, fantastic job on this. I love the imagery. Please put your option in the author's notes!
Best of Luck!
FallenPoeticAngel
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