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Falling

eyes spoke in
illusion
referring to shadows
gracing corners
beckoning come hither
allowing you to fall
into delusions
all of your own
creation...


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option no. 6 Illusions

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  • penman gold member
    July 5, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Oh my what a great expression for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.


  • FallingTwilight
    July 5, 2007

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    Wow.Great take on the prompt. Fantastic job! I loved it. Please put your option in the author notes.

    Best of luck!

    FallenPoeticAngel