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I Stay

Standing in the bathroom mirror
you asked the reason why I stay
I couldn't find the words then
but I have them now....

I stay because you're my soft place
to fall when the world seems to be
caving in on me

I stay because of the kind words
of encouragement you have
when I feel like giving up

I stay because you protect my honor

I stay becaue you make feel warm and protected

I stay because your patient and understanding
with me

I stay because you get the real me
warts and all

I stay because home is where the heart is
and you have mine

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  • jbbrandi
    March 23, 2008

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    Aw! This is very sweet...I liked this a lot, especially the last line. Very nice. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    September 17, 2007

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    Beautiful. Truly beautiful and heartfelt and absolutely WHY one stays. I loved this beautiful poem. ~Pamela


  • the-gifted
    September 14, 2007
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    aww very sweet. great write.thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Raida Boy94
    July 5, 2007
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    That was lovely Brian is going to love it