Standing in the bathroom mirror
you asked the reason why I stay
I couldn't find the words then
but I have them now....
I stay because you're my soft place
to fall when the world seems to be
caving in on me
I stay because of the kind words
of encouragement you have
when I feel like giving up
I stay because you protect my honor
I stay becaue you make feel warm and protected
I stay because your patient and understanding
with me
I stay because you get the real me
warts and all
I stay because home is where the heart is
and you have mine
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST: I WANT LOVE RIGHT NOW. PREWRITES ALLOWED...COME IN AND CHECK OUT by the-gifted.
600 points, ended September 26, 2007, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The love of your life... by jbbrandi.
750 points, ended March 24, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Aw! This is very sweet...I liked this a lot, especially the last line. Very nice. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!!

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Beautiful. Truly beautiful and heartfelt and absolutely WHY one stays. I loved this beautiful poem.
~Pamela


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aww very sweet. great write.thanks for entering and good luck.
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That was lovely Brian is going to love it




