So hunky,were you
so delightfully divine
Loved your look
so did everybody else
admired by many
You knew it and everyone else
knew you knew it
and why not
it was true
Looked so great together
I loved that you loved me so
Jealous looks everywhere we'd go
Laid back and easy
if it doesn't sound too cheesy
you always tried to please me
So why couldn't I love you back
Witty,charming,total hunk in fact
but I couln'd help feeling
you were concealing
Something deep in your gaze
that made me feel ill
I saw it all
you were not noble or true
So no more loving glances
I'm not taking any chances
I could see the lies
in your icy eyes
There are nicer guys,
with much nicer eyes
A contest entry
- Quickie: With A Few Twists by FallingTwilight.
450 points, ended July 5, 2007, 9 entries
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