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Icy Eyes(Hay(na) ku)

My
Love dies
In icy eyes

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Prompt:Icy Eyes

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  • blondone
    July 10, 2007

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    very short but packs a punch this is why I love these quickies they bring out some intense writes...thanks for playing this morning


  • FallingTwilight
    July 5, 2007

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    Nice take on the prompt. Please put your option in the author notes.

    Best of luck!

    FallenPoeticAngel