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Wind Lullabies

Bustling through
Ignorant streets,

Breathing upon
Fresh vast meadows,

Searching through
Oblivious lives,

Telling lost tales
Obscured memories

Whispering secrets,
Singing sweet lullabys,

We all will become
Tales of the wind

A contest entry

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  • Florida Sunshine
    January 10, 2008

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    Awesome job~ the piece just rushes along like the wind~ its really quite a deep poem if you think about how our lives do move like the wind~ moving with the currents along our own daily paths~ .... Okay~ Maybeeeee i'm reading more than you intended ~ but isn't it about how a reader might relate to your work~ ~ I liked it ~ ~

    Thanks for entering the "Set the Bar" contest ~ good luck ~ you did a terrific job


  • thelovesongwriter
    July 18, 2007

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    very short yet very powerful. great write I enjoyed reading this

    good luck&thanks for entering

    -lovesong

  • Nicole Hanna
    July 6, 2007

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    The last line left me with a chill, but in a good way, I promise. Makes me want to curl up with a blanket, while it rains, and read this poem over again. Thank you for entering my contest and giving me the chance to read it.


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    What a fabulous write. Your lines reached right out to me "Whispering secrets, singing sweet lullaby's" Lovely work! Creative and inviting to read ~Tia


  • kaibab silver member
    July 5, 2007

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    I am stranger to city breeze
    of taller canyon gusting corner
    in gypsy tail to chatter song
    through falling park of right and wrong...


    a different, but wonderful take on the prompt


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 5, 2007

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    Excellent poetry!
    The more I read, the more I see where I could improve! Nicely done; I wish you the best in this contest


  • kaibab silver member
    July 5, 2007
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    Your Prompt is: Wind Song
    remember 30 words

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