haiku:calming

peace serenity
like the water in a pool
untouched by the wind

A contest entry

For Poets With Less Than 10 Trophys by Mercury Rising. 600 points, ended July 9, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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Short Poems' Wanted!! by SignifyingNothing. 450 points, ended October 19, 2008, 123 entries
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SignifyingNothing
October 15, 2008

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Very very nice image here. I can see why it won an Honorable Mention! I really liked this a lot. It was definitely one of the better nature poems I have read so far. I like the metaphor of a calm pool to stand for inner peace. This is just an all around great nature haiku, can't think of a single thing to change or add to it- its perfect.
james119
April 22, 2008
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nice write. good pivot line, great image
nannalishious
October 8, 2007
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the best poems are short and sweet and still hold a lot of meaning
Mercury Rising
July 9, 2007

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Short and sweet. Like a realy big fortune in a very small cookie. Thanks for entering, and best of luck.

David
Lucca
July 5, 2007
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wow beautiful, i liked the words and it was calming nicely done...