Our lives os busy.
Never enough time, to enjoy natures gifts.
A gentle breeze stirring the grass in the field.
A meadow lark singing its beautiful song.
Blossoms on the flowes newlt bloomed.
Ducks swimming on the golden pond.
Take a moment of time.
Relax, breathe the air so sweet.
Enjoy what nature has given.
Set down on the banks of golden pond.
Please tell me what you think
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aye, people rush about far too quickly sometimes, never taking a moment to just stop and look around, a good poem.
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A delightful invitation to reconnect to one's soul, when it is possible to drown in busy-ness and day-to-day clatter. Beautiful descriptions, and a thoughtful reminder that nowadays we need to carve out time for renewal; it won't snatch us away from our hurried and hassled routines.
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I walk my meadow in eyes of columbine,
delicate blue skies as petals of fingers
greeting morning blush in brook
whisping frost to melt my footprints...
this is such truth...lovely
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I believe this is a great poem, a great theme surrounded by amazing description and imagery. I also like the way it directly addresses the reader. Nice work! I think I'll heed your advice as well; golden pond here i come
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Beautiful
This is just great, I'm certainly not going to try to analyze it, I'm just going to feel it. Sit here in the that sunny place in my mind and watch the ducks. Great write.
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This piece exemplifies the true reason for life. While here learning lessons and experiencing the strong virtues both good and bad life delves out in teachings. We were given stewardship and a beautiful view of nature's many gifts bestowed of creation.Targeted concept relays well Poet!
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Nice words. Wish it were longer. Feel like I am sitting at the pond revealing the pond you right about. Enjoyed it.
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Nice work!
First time reviewer for you! You might want to correct the first line as "are" instead of "os. Otherwise this is a poem worth thinking about! GOOD JOB!
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So Relaxing.
Hello, Your words paint a beautiful relaxing picture. Great imagery makes this a pleasure to read. Thanks for the smile it brought. You take care. You keep enjoying the beauty God has created for us. Sandy 
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