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Earth's Exploitation

Corruption.
Peaceful pristine grounds
'till war erupts-- digging lacerations
  firing ashes, blotting crimson
  on dry earth.
Tainted utopia,
depreciated heaven.

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Prompt: "Scarred Perfection"
15 minutes 20 words

A contest entry

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 12, 2007
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    Congratulations on the silver

    Yes we do live on a heavenly body, until we tear it up. Well worded poem.
    Buddy


  • Bedroom Eyes
    July 5, 2007

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    VIVID imagery in this. Brilliant actually. This piece should net a trophy of some kind. GREAT job with the prompt

    Best of luck!


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    Another gorgeous take on this prompt, vivid imagery and phrasing. Loved it Bunny


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 5, 2007
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    Your Prompt is: "Scarred Perfection"