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Not Quite Finished

I can't seem to get away from
your shadow.
I can't seem to escape from what I am,
Why I am
Who I am.

I just don't know.

I still can't remove
this feeling,
this badge from my broken heart.

Too easily damaged,
too fragile,
too stupid.

I can't go on this way,
Can no longer stand the pain.

With all of this
confussion
spinning round inside,

and the lies.

It makes me feel,
stops me,
from breathing,
from living
again.

Need to open up the window
stop staring at the other side
of the fence,
stop feeling,
believing

Stop.

Lying.

I can't,
I can't.
anymore.

I won't
I won't
Please don't make me.

Because I refuse this time.

I refuse to be weak
I refuse.

I refuse to continue on this path.

I'm not done.

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  • clara wilson-nelson
    July 17, 2007

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    GOOD eye catching

    short love and being tired always makes a good read. everyone is experiencing this all the time whether happy in your relationship or not doubt is always there and hurt is always there and this poem brings that out in the open