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Symphonious Tomb

Aria embodies soul's passion
Resonating, thundering
Minor scales descending
Encompassing a rose
Love's resting place

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Prompt: Phantom of the Opera
15 minutes, 15 words

Think of the last scene from the movie- the gravestone, the rose and the ring.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    July 5, 2007
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    This is wonderful Great Job. I really liked the vibe of this one. Good luck in the contest


  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007

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    Wow. Breathtakingly beautiful piece you made me drift off on, here. Great job indeed. The title was extremely good too.