Mirror, mirror
On the wall
Why do you
Hate me so?
I dress in
All my best
Yet you show
Ugliness
Throwing sticks
And
Hurling stones
The face you bounce back
Kills my soul
Mirror, mirror
I confess
I am nothing
But emptiness
Author notes
Raw emotion
A contest entry
- Just Another Contest You Won't Look At Or Are You Proving Me Wrong?!? by Xxthe angry gothxX.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mirror Mirror by Ignis Corpus.
500 points, ended August 1, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mirror Mirror by Ignis Corpus.
500 points, ended August 1, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mirror Monsters by Forgot2Breathe.
300 points, ended September 4, 2007, 55 entries
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Comments
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wow this here was a potent ppiece. full of a powerful punch great job dear poet.
Great imagery and emotion.
Tory -
I dress in
All my best
Yet you show
Ugliness
Throwing sticks
And
Hurling stones
The face you bounce back
Kills my soul
great work
really loved it
and i can relate to what your saying
"There are always too many rotten pillars left standing,
too much festering humanity for man to bloom. The superstructure
is a lie and the foundation is a huge quaking fear."
-Anonymous
(felt that quote had something to do with this in a way)
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wow, thats good, i liked it good job and i wish you the best of luck in this contest.
Beautifuldisasterxx -
Nice
Well, I really liked this first off. It sent a very powerful message to me. I feel it too. The whole entire thing was great. I think you could put more into it, go for it. Good luck
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