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Night's Oblivion

Silence is consuming
in night's oblivion

as our sky falls

A contest entry

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  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007
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    Ooh. Me like. Me like a lot. Great work. Loved the last line especially. Terrific!


  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 5, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry.........
    A great choice of 10 words......
    goodluck in the contest
    Tracey.

  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 5, 2007
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    PROMPT - 'under the same night sky'

  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007
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    Good luck.