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Wishes -HM


The same stars staring
at me,
as you-

forget wishes.





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under the same night sky

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  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007

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    Great job! I loved the use of the last line. Forget wishes because you and the one you love are already one...already a whole. Great!


  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 5, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry.........
    A great choice of 10 words......
    goodluck in the contest
    Tracey.


  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 5, 2007
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    PROMPT - 'under the same night sky'


  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007
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    Good luck.

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