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Night Sky

shimmer,
silken moonlight
alighting existence,
encircling embrace confirming
your love

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cinquain

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  • acqua
    July 5, 2007

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    this is especially beautiful, it is so serene and full of the enchantment of moonlight. And in 10 words!!
    congratulations on the much deserved Gold. All the best to you, loved this Cinquain a lot!


  • Whispers of Hope
    July 5, 2007

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    wow beautifull

    wow this is great i love it the imagery is perfect. much better thatn mine in 10 words!!! wish u the best of luck!!


  • burdened
    July 5, 2007
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    Beautiful. Great job. X


  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007
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    Lovely cinquain. Wow. Dazzling. Great work.


  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 5, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry.........
    A great choice of 10 words......
    goodluck in the contest
    Tracey.


  • Lyre-Bird-
    July 5, 2007
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    PROMPT - 'under the same night sky'


  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007
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    Good luck.

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