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Is Revenge Bliss ?

IS revenge bliss
Restoring some
Equilibrium ? This
Vengeance dumb
Each abyss is causal hit and miss
Numb leaves protagonists' sum
Grieving. For no kiss
Echoes Time's revenge cycle drum ... !
BLISS ?

 

 

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  • I CRIED

    that was beautiful and in more ways than one... i NEARLY didn't comment on this work of art but when i hit RANDOM again on AP i came here again! it was like a sign from the man abuv.


  • Lady Eventide
    July 5, 2007
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    Loved it. Like the way you wrote it with an acrostic and everything. Great word choice. Good luck.