One phone call
at 1 in the morning
changed many lives
for the worst
We all cried for you, Rob
We all love you, Rob
We all miss you, Rob
We all will never forget you, Rob
Locked up for life
how could this happen
it was just 4 days ago
you were talking about fishing
You didn't look dangerous
Now matter what people say
You will always be the guy
who saved my life that night
You are a good guy
now people will think
of you differently
but I won't
You will remain the same
in my eyes and heart
The same funny guy
who loves his fishing and country
I will cry for you forever, Rob
I will love you for forever, Rob
I will miss you for forever, Rob
I will never forget you, Rob
Author notes
Yeah. One of my best friends, basically older brother, is going to prison. Thats all you need to know. I'll miss him.
(Happy B-Day To You!)
A contest entry
- FREE WRITTING! ~ Let me see your heart and whats in it~ by Faithcomesin.
500 points, ended July 10, 2007, 8 entries
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good
this was really good and like the other people said it was like very sad and strong. I didn't know u felt that way about Rob I know he's like ur older brother and u should but I guess I never really thought about it like that until u know this Ur lucky u weren't there when great grandma was saying like I think he said die if he kilt someone. It's whatever if u were there u probably just tried to ignore her cause it would get u madd. This was really good and I thnk u r a really good person to look up to for like somethings such as poetry writing. I told a few of my friends I write poetry and they all laugh at me ur lucky like all of ur friends write poetry so they don;t think it's funny well guess I should go now sorry bout how u feel bout rob leaving
Love
~♥Freddy♥~
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This is a wonderful poem...very strong emotions flowing wonderfully through this master piece! good luck in the contest!
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awww
Thanks for the entry, and for letting me feel your hurt. Im sorry for whatever has happened, and my prayers are with you, today. Remember to keep faith, and look unto God.
amanda
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