Touch me
with tender glances
as my hands find your heart.
We don't need words
with such closeness
in the quiet caress of spirits.
I could swim
in the softness of your smile
enticing me to dance,
In a crowded room,
I see only your eyes
inviting intimacy
in subtle gestures,
fingers finding mine,
intertwining
as souls unite
in love, unspoken.
♥♥
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Author notes
background courtesy of Angel With No Halo
A contest entry
- Subtle, Quiet, Intimacy by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 5, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
fingers finding mine,
intertwining
as souls unite
in love, unspoken.
Wonderfull soft words
Great rythem and flow to this
Love where it leads us to
Rick
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Beautiful
another beautiful romantic write that can only leave the reader with a sigh. wishing you all the very best of luck in this contest Brian.
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It is in the silences where we hear the love. It is in the moments, cyrstal perfect, the forever is enshrined. Love, Tom B.
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This is more than beautiful
This one has touched my soul to its' depth...
It touches a deeply personal place within me
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest
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I love this one! Beautiful, soft, and very
sincere are your words here. Good luck to you
with this one!
Jeremy0826 -
This is so beautiful.
The imagery is wonderful and I feel your emotions perfectly.
This is stunning, really.
"with tender glances
as my hands find your heart."
I love it.
Wonderful job! <3
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