The rain
Angel of rain
Lets raindrops fall on us
Pure water from heaven she sends
Sometimes it gently falls sometimes a storm
Please enjoy this special water
Refreshing natures needs
A gift from God
The rain
Author notes
this contest has also inspired
my entry for my Titles challenge group
daily Title The Rain
In a list
A contest entry
- The Angel of Rain by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended July 17, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Everything about this piece appeals to me ... very nicely penned and exquisite layout and font. Congrats on the silver.x
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fanx u bethan
x cheeky x
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I have never tried doing a "Rictameter" poem, but I can see you are a pro at them by the example here. I love how you created the mood for a beautiful storm. I want to thank you for entering my "The Angel of Rain" contest.
Ted E
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fanx u Ted E i have only done a few rictameters but i do love them for the right poem they are quite easy..the pix was a butiful inspritation fanx u... oh and i like a pro
fanx u x cheeky x
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Ah just lovely...In Australia we have been in a big drought for such a long time, this is just what we need...rain and loads of it...this would be a wonerful prayer for farmers over here.
Cathy
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we get a lot of rain here in my town so i will email you some next time it rains..fanx u for your comment
xxx cheeky xxx
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A very passionate and very beautifully penned with imagery , And I love the angel flying over the water
Thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work and also for sharing your work with all of us here on ap, -
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fanx u robert for such a butiful comment
xxx cheeky xxx
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Beautiful
Isn't it wonderful how the rain cleanses everything even our souls. What wonderful imagery and emotion. I so loved this
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fanx u Aunt Theresa yea i love the rain xxx cheeky xxx
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very nice poem sweetie, love the pic to good luck in the contest.
I love you x0x0x0x0x0x0x0
Your Master 4 ever
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fanx u Master i was struggling to do this one for the group till this contest pix inspired me lol xxx 4eva your cheeky xxx
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