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Whispering

Flutter,
sweet butterfly,
from pink to yellow rose,
whispering to each as you go:
"farewell,
but only for this afternoon.
I'll flutter by again
for sure, on the
morrow".

A contest entry

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  • azure85 gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    This is so sweet and locely, the butterfly itself is speaking though each line and word. Beautiful in form and flow, thank you for this entry.

  • quakietree
    July 7, 2007

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    Nice butterfly cinquain.
    I like the way this is from the perspective of the butterfly.
    Good work and good luck in the contest.
    qt