misty mornings
foggy days
memories spent, all lost in haze
times when nothing separates us
except
those vast empty silences
A contest entry
- Another quick one by masterblaster.
300 points, ended July 5, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options Contest, Allowing Prewrites by AlternateCandidate.
500 points, ended August 13, 2007, 36 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I think that this is nice. The rhyming isn't my favorite, but it is contained and not throughout the whole poem, which makes it a little easier for me to adjust to. I do like the scene that you present. I can envision the setting, the two people together and yet apart because of their inability/refusal to communicate. Thank you entering.
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Like this a lot, a combination of rhyme and none rhyme which I have done in the past, worked well
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