what to believe'n
what not--shots fly like hornets--
caught flat in crossfire
Author notes
Thoughts after listening to a fierce debate in the Legislative Assembly on an issue involving corruption. Journalists get caught in the crossfire, with the men accused of graft seeing a 'syndicated operation' in the newspaper stories.
Please tell me what you think
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This is kind of awkward and I had to read twice. The punctuation is what confused me. Nice concept though, makes a very cool haiku.
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This was unique and intriguing! You certainly captured the spirit of your Authors notes within the piece, Good job
~Tia
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Thank you, Tia ji.
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