There are so many people
who have helped me along the way.
Mark, you're always an insperation
and a shoulder to cry on when I need to.
You have helped me through so much
(even though we've never met in real life)
Daddy, you're like the father I never had.
You've helped me so much and I am so happy
to have you in my life.
You can always make me smile no matter
how gloomy life seems.
Richard, you mean so much to me.
I don't even have the words to thank you
for all you've done, but right now
I really have to say I'm sorry...
(I really am sorry)
Sissy, you mean the world and so much more to me.
You're like the sunshine in my life when
everything seems gloomy and dark.
You're everything I could have wished for
in a sister.
Bro, you and me. Freaks forever.
You've been there for me through thick
and thin, and you know I'm there for you.
Flaw, you know I mean you too.
There are sooo many more people I have to thank,
but you all know who you are.
Remes, Matt, Merlynn, all of you...
Thank you for being there.
Author notes
Okay, there have been so many people who have helped me grow and become who I am, but the people I have thanked are(in order): Azriel Stormcrow, Passionate Knight, Constant Rain, Live4FandFs, Jeremy Cummings, Damnednforgotten, Remes, Auron of Neon, and Lord Merlynn...To everyone I didn't mention, you know you are all in my thoughts.
A contest entry
- Pay it forward - the real thing by Dienush.
1800 points, ended August 6, 2007, 17 entries
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Hey Little Sis
Hey Little Sis this is so sweet and tender... I don't have words to thank you enough to come in my life... but where are you hun? We're just worried sick about you... Please give me a call to let me know you are doing ok... You are never alone, all you need to do is look on your side, or turn around, you'll find me right there with you by your side... take care
Love sis
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My Little Roo...
Your tribute to these special people and me as well is very touching. I smiles with such pride reading this piece. You are a very special person whom we all care about and you are also a very special part of our lives. To have you as my Daughter, is one of by greatest Joys. I am very proud of you and everything that you are. If you stumble and fall through life’s journey, I will always be here with open arms... and a shoulder for you to lean on. I will also be here if you ever need to talk.. about anything..
I woud like to thank you so much for writting this tribute to all of us who touched your life in a special way.
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Well this doesn't sound like an artistic poem so much as like a thank-you note. I hope those this is meant for get to read it. Saying thank you is always a nice thing. Thanks for entering my contest.
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I hope they do too....and I intentionally ment it to sound like a think you letter instead of a poem...I don;t know why, but I did.
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