I watch as you walk in
The room is dark and cold
The right combination for your heart
A smile on my face and a gun in my hands
Fear in your eyes
That's it...play it up for me baby
Act like you want to live
Oh you do want to live?
Sucks to be you
You left me
All those years ago
With little thought to the child in my womb
You left me with a carbon copy of you
Now I leave you with a copy of her birth certificate
Don’t mind the blood stains
She didn’t make as pathetic as a scene as you do
Now worries my “Love”
I wouldn't dream of hurting her
I just slit her throat in her dreams; no pain, no fear
Unfortunately for you I want you suffer
I want you to bleed your last breath
Gaze upon your eyes' last sight
Gasp for me baby
Let me hear your fear
Scream for my darling
I want to bask in your ruin;
In your once promising life
Die for me sweet heart
Tell me one last good-bye
Author notes
Okay...thanks for reading. Originally I started this piece for a contest but then I decided that it wasn't good enough for that. I hope that ya all enjoyed it.
I know it sucks...but please tell me how badly.
Comments
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Great piece of work here, you have a great talent for storytelling and the diction is just amazing.Great job!
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this is really dark but i enjoyed it, its an amazing write u managed to capture emotions very well in this
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i love it
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wow. dark, painstaking, wonderful. Your anger became my anger, your pain my apin as I read this poem. excellent, the tone was amazing, and it made me tingle as I read it. bravo!
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wow
i could feel the anger as I read the lines. This was very good and kinda creepy. I liked it.
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I can feel the anger in it, its a great write. You almost made me cringe, and thats great. I applaud you ;o
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Wow rather angry but well written.
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oh wow i love this, very powerful. i love how you put in the part about her child, it was perfect timing. verynnice, you really bring your readers into the story. great work i love it
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