Gentle
strokes of colour
vagrantly enthralling
illuminating dim lights held
within
enchanting gardens with shimmer
kissing gentle peaches
grasping tightly
nature
A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A chance for gold by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 24, 2007, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the imagery and the form. I am a fan of cinquians and haven't done that for a few months now.
Thanks so much for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing fellow poet.
>>>VIRGOAN
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Very beautiful images and sensations though your butterfly cinqain, with such a lovely flow of words. Thank you so much!
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Beautiful Butterfly Cinquain with such lovely imagery, good luck in the contest and all the best to you~
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thank you so much
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