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She Found Her Halo~

Missing image

When the Sun forgets to shine,

leaving skies
a simple shade of gray

and moments of morning
seem to melt
into another mundane memory,


she shines in colors

of crimson and rose,
and sprinkles petals of gladness
in poetic glances

that bloom
in our smiles...~



Author notes

I am ......poet2angels

This poem is dedicated to my dear friend and AP Sis, Krys (Angel With No Halo) ..
She always makes me smile and if I get a little ticked off lol she makes me forget and laugh

Love ya!

Lynda

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  • jasminerose
    July 13, 2007

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    OH Lynda
    Congratulations on winning with this beautiful dedication to your wonderful dear friend(Sis)
    Such a lovely poem written with so much elegance!
    So very pretty!!!
    Jazzy


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    July 12, 2007

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    It seems we share the same sister, how lucky we are

    This is a beautiful dedication, so elloquently penned, I'm sure you will have made her day and put a smile across her face

    Nice use of metaphor and alliteration, quite enchanting to read

    Much love ~Lilac


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 11, 2007

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    Another beautiful piece by you Lynda!
    I am sure that Krys will love this
    one! Well done and good luck to you
    with it!




    Jeremy0826


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    July 8, 2007
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    Good Write

    nice write very unusual but then again still a very nice poem kepe up the good work


  • Pisces Pieces
    July 5, 2007

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    It's so very pretty and serene, a beautiful image shines it's way across one's mind with these words...




  • tomisb
    July 5, 2007
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    Wonderful tribute, a delightful smile.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Legend silver member
    July 5, 2007

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    What an wonderful little tribute to a friend.There are folks in life who have the ability to move us in ways that are hard to understand It is just a joy that such people exist


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 5, 2007

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    This is beautiful
    The poem wasn't even for me and I find myself sitting here crying these big crocodile tears...I love this!
    Beautifully done


  • kaibab silver member
    July 5, 2007
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    Well I think this is lovely and sent from the heart of an angel to another...


  • Angel With No Halo
    July 5, 2007
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    This brought the sweetest of smiles to my face sweety. It has been a while since I have had a poem written about me. The last person to do so was Hana.. I miss her so much!!! But you made me want to cry with this poem. It touched my heart in ways you could never know.You are an amazing woman and poet and I hope you never forget that.

    Love,
    ~Krys~


    • poet2angels gold member
      July 5, 2007

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      awwwww, ty
      It was just a simple poem but from the heart
      You always make people smile....Glad this made you smile

      Love ya!

      Lynda

      • Angel With No Halo
        July 6, 2007

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        I forgot if I mentioned if I could put this on my Auth page...I am a little out of it at the moment.. had that lithotripsy done today and in pain.. so on pain killers.. so a little out of it..anyhow.. just wanted to say I will be doing that sometime this week.. when I remember.. Love ya!!

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