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Hungover!

Missing image
Oh dear!
What have I done?
I should have stopped at one
I wasn't going to get drunk
Saving lost souls just proves so hard at times
Why should I not be allowed to?
One little drink, I thought
Now my head hurts
Oh dear!

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Bob Fox
    July 17, 2007

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    lol

    Just one? lol some never stop at just one. And as for me the next day I always seem to say... Never again


    • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
      July 17, 2007
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      Yep...I've also said those words "Never again". Doesn't seem to work for long though Thanks for your comment and applause

  • Amera gold member
    July 14, 2007

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    How cool! I didn't expect a Rictameter in this type of contest. Very good and original.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    July 10, 2007

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    Wonderfully done! I like the images in this and the flow of the rictameter is excellent
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene


  • leo2
    July 6, 2007

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    I've been told the key to not getting a hangover is to never stop drinking. I'm still searching for the door... never mind the key..lol. Best of luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.


    • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
      July 6, 2007
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      Yep...I reckon life would be a whole lot less complicated if I just stayed pissed Ok, maybe not, but it sounds good in theory Thanks for your great comment and 'happy clappies'

  • grannyeri gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Even angels can't seem to stop at one- liked this rictameter and picture you chose to go with it. Think the colour says something too. LOL


    • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
      July 6, 2007
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      Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate your comment and applause. Yep...the colour is enough to make you want to throw up isn't it
  • Whiplash
    July 5, 2007

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    Ouch! I know that feeling a little too well. It's a pity it's so hard to stop at one! Very funny and well written poem. Good luck to you in the contest

    • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
      July 5, 2007
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      Thank you !

      I appreciate your comment. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem

  • cheeky lil monkey gold member
    July 5, 2007
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    i love it me LLT
    loves ya xxxx


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    Er um!!! Sorry but this reminds me of Glenda between Leitchville and Cohuna in HER car and later at the motel....m e m o r i e s from the corners of her mouth!!!! Delete at will babe!
    Ya cousin in fun and mammaries!

    pee ess Glenys' car that is!


    • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
      July 5, 2007
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      Yep...I remember it well Thanks for your comment and applause (and trip down memory lane )

  • pearl-dragon gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    GORGEOUS !!!!

    You are so clever, darling...looks like I'm running with the A-listers now
    Poor angel, know how she feels sometimes
    Best of luck to you, lovey


    • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
      July 5, 2007
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      Thank you !

      I guess angels have bad days too Thanks so much for your comment and 'happy clappies'

  • HeavenScent4U gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    this is cute but i can also see why she was left in this predicament
    very well written and i love the format of this best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • pickers silver member
    July 5, 2007

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    Very funny!!! Nice one! I can just imagine the stress the poor angel was under, and how she needed a bit of a break!! Congrats on a great poem and good luck in the contest!

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