untouched
sacred emblems
adorned tribal wigwams
unforgotten, a heritage
undreamed
yet, under hides of buffalo
unseen through great divides
warriors passed
unheard
In a list
A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hood-Winked!
A skillfully crafted butterfly cinquain. Lovely depth of feeling. Good flow and tone. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Congratulations on winning Honorable Mention. Well deserved.
You have just been hoodwinked by a member of The Poetic Bandits.
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A wonderful impression you have written about, the way nature once once, and still is inside the hearts of The People. Thank you so much for taking us there thought your butterfly cinquain.
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Woohoo, thank you so very much for the HM
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awsome write which is really descriptve and fits the picture. awsome write. good luck in the comp
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