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Big Bang

I
always
imagine
the start of the
Universe: a burst
(just like a firework)
perfect blast of color and
a sonic boom (you can still hear)
To this day: (like fireworks) we're big bangs

A contest entry

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  • Nicole Hanna
    July 6, 2007

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    "big bangs"... I got myself a bit of a giggle out of that play on words there. It makes sense, and it's clever, and this was just really enjoyable to me. Thanks for entering my contest. It was a pleasure to get the chance to read this one.


  • The Burning Year
    July 5, 2007

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    I am
    in love
    with this.

    the way you write is great..and with this being longer than usual..I think it is one of my favorites so far