Trusting
in more than self
fluttering nervously
wings of soul spread with the Lord's help
faith soars
spirit dances in heaven's breath
heart flies to reach rainbows
feeling so free
inside
Author notes
Prompt - Butterfly Cinquains
A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a beautiful comparison, the beauty of the butterfly and the life of faith. This was a wonderful conept to write in this form, just lovely. Thank you so much.
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Beautiful, Spiritual and full of such gently stirring imagery, a wonderfully done piece, good luck in the contest and all the best to you!~
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Wow!!
I have never tried one of these before
Gorgeous presentation and equally Gorgeous words!
Powerful energy You exude with this piece
Just Brilliant!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Awww,thanks sweetness. You always make me feel like butterfly.
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